Final Journal:

I'm only here to go to the dentist! I'm at the medical center, and the dentist is on the fifth floor. But the elevator has stopped, and the sixth, seventh and eigth floors are the hospital and surgery rooms. The elevator is full.
Some of the people in the elevator are freaking out. One of the paitients is clausterphobic, I think. He's hyperventilating, and a nurse is trying to get him to slow down. Thee is a little girl who's cring because her arm is broken, and it still hurts. I feel bad for her, and I'm trying to get her to smile. But I feel strange. I'm the only person wh isn't hurt or an employee. There's not much I can do, except try not to draw attention to myself by freakng out on te guy who is beind me, breathing on m neck, like a stalker.
Come on. stupid elevator, work!! The breathing guy is creeping me out!




Elevator Crucible:


"Why have we stopped?" Lila demanded, looking around. She was not happy at having been forced to go shopping for Christmas gifts with her sister.
Mercedes punched the elevator buttons, just as pleased with the situation as Lila, "It's stopped working..."
Lila scoffed, "Good job, Sherlock. I hadn't noticed!"
Her sister scowled, "You're horrible, you know that?!"
They both fell silent for a few moments.
"At least I don't work in a fish shop." Lila spat, slow to think of a reply.
Mercedes groaned, "You are an idiot."
"Shut up!"
"No."
"You always smell like fish. No wonder you never have a boyfriend, 'my lovely sister' " Lila drwled, her voice sickley sweet and dripping with sacasm.
But Mercedes smiled, "I earn my money, at least. When Daddy stops supporting your butt, you're gonna hav NO idea what to do in the real world."
Lila pouted, crossing her arms.
Mercedes sighed and sat down in the corner.
After a few minutes of silence, Mercedes grew bored, "C'mon, little elevator! Start now! You're a good little elevator! Yes you are! Yes you are!"
"Mercedes!"
She stopped mid sentance, then looked at her sister, "Yeah?"
"Shut up. The elevator doesn't have ears."
The both were silent again, pouting, and they waited for the elevaor to start back up.


Sidenote: These were both ritten two monhs apart.... can you tel I hae a fear of being stuck in an elevator? XD.




Star Wars re-write script (love scene in episode two on the balcony):



Anakin: In the desert.... everything is so rough. But you're just.... *he touches her arm* You're so soft. I'm not used to it.

Padme: *surprised* Is that... That's not bad, is it?

Anakin: No. No, that's not bad. *smile*

Padme: *smiles hesitantly*

Ana: *starts to lean in to kiss her*

Pad: *loses smile* Stop it.

A: *doesn't pull back* What's wrong?

P: *doesn't pull back at first, either* I can't. I won't.

A: *confused* Why not?!

P: *as if it's obvious* You're a Jedi. Love is forbidden. And I'm a politician. *walks away*

A: Padme! *looks afer her. cofused, and then sighs angrily. He punches the railing.*



Actors Studio Method:

John: Is on the phone, ordering a pizza, when Julia walks in.
Julia: Is John's jealous girlfriend who is convinced John is speaking to another woman in code.

John: Mmhmm...yeah, okay. Half an hour?
[Julia walks in]
John: Alright... 30 minutes. Make sure it's hot, okay?

Julia: Who is that?!

John: [covers mouthpiece of the phone] Nobody, honey. [Into the phone] Extra cheese, right? Okay. Right.

Julia: 'Extra cheese'?! What does that mean?

John: It means extra cheese, Julia.

Julia: What, am I not good enough for you?!"

John: Julia! I'm HUNGY!

Julia: So you have to go somewhere else? [starts to cry] I'm hurt, John. How could you?

John: Sweetheart.... I love you, but... your pizza just is never quite right.

Julia: 'My Pizza'?! It's 'my pizza' now?!



Sidenote: I'm out of time, I finish this tonight if I can.
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